During this second semester 2013-2014 in my English course, Journey in
Literature, we learned to distinguish two kinds of journeys: an external
journey and an inner journey. These two journeys are connected with the same
idea: the identity concept. Now I am going to talk specifically about my
external journey during the course. We were assigned a blog in which we shared
our writing experiences, reflections and thoughts about our external journey.
This exercise helps us to write about our external journey that represents the
identity concept. In addition, we connected the external journey with the
othering concept.
As overall changes I identify that the blog helped me to improve my
literature process. This exercise also helps me to improve my analytical and
writing skills. I have learned with this activity to summarize, to analyze and
to be organized. I also learned to be objective and express what I am thinking
in words to bring a message to the readers. The blog’s activity also helps me
to understand better the identity concept and to show people that the identity
is what identify and define us. I also had the opportunity to analyze the
othering concept to see the point of difference. In my opinion the blog is the
best way to bring the message that human beings have their own identity. I
intended with my blog’s reflection showing what is an external journey and how
important is the identity of each person. In the blog you will find that I
clearly expressed the different between a tourist and traveler and how
important is for people know about the places they visit. The external journey
is represented about the knowledge that you could have from the different
places and what you want to express to other people. This is clearly expressed
in the othering and the identity concepts.
The posts that I most enjoyed were the first post about “Ten Important
Places that I have Visited” and the sixth post about “A Day as a Tourist in
Puerto Rico”. These were my favorites blog’s posts because in them I could
express my feelings. These blog’s post were important for my external journey
because these posts directly define my identity as a Puerto Rican and my
personal external journey as a traveler. I learned about myself that I have a
complete identity as Puerto Rican and I am very proud of being Puerto Rican. I
also learn that my external journey represents what define myself and how I
perceive the othering concept. In this external journal I identify myself as a
traveler because when I visited the different places I was interested to know
about the history and the people of the places that I visited, instead of just
visit a place to escape from my own reality.
This experience was very meaningful and I really enjoyed doing this
project. I love to link my own experiences with the class activities because
with this I can feel identified. In my personal opinion the blog’s activity
reflected what define myself. This exercise is very useful because it force us
to practice the English. I also think that this activity is very educational
and a different way to learn English. I enjoyed doing the blog and I also
improve my cybernetic skill. I suggest as future ideas about external journeys
to do field experiences in the university and to do class’s tours around the
Island, because in that way the whole group and each student individually could
experiment the experience of being a traveler or a tourist. I think that the
external journey is both a collective and an individual experience in which you
can perceive the othering and the identity concept. In the class we had the
opportunity to experience the individual external journey but not a completely
collective external journey. Therefore, is important that we interact with our
classmates and other people to live the experience of an external journey. We
had a great experience working in-group in the course but this may not be
enough to complete the external journey. Finally, I think that my external
journey and my inner journey will continue and this is just the beginning of
both journeys.
Well done reflection Laura. I agree with you that this blog is just the beginning of our internal and external journey. I had the opportunity to work with you as a group team and it was an enriching experience that helped me to expand my external journey. Overall you did and excellent reflection.
ReplyDeleteNice work Laura and I totally agree with you, the journey help me too to improve my literature process.
ReplyDeleteGreat way to summarize your experience with the blog and the journal. I also feel like it helped me in my external and internal journey. Both were great tools to expand our knowledge! Excellent job Laura!
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